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整體語言較為流暢，符合現代漢語表達規範。句子結構清晰，用詞得當，未出現明顯的語法錯誤或生硬直譯的情況。
整體來看，翻譯準確傳達了原文的核心信息和事實內容。對於「系統性腐敗」「寡頭」「反腐措施」等關鍵詞的處理較為恰當，專業術語翻譯規範且準確。不過，仍有個別語句略顯模糊，建議進一步加強術語的精準性，以增強譯文的專業性和權威性。
翻譯內容基本涵蓋了原文的主要要點，包括腐敗的定義、歷史背景、現狀、反腐機構以及公眾反應等。整體結構清晰，層次分明，未遺漏關鍵信息。
The overall language is relatively smooth and conforms to modern Chinese expression norms. The sentence structure is clear, the wording is appropriate, and there are no obvious grammatical errors or literal translations.
Overall, the translation accurately conveys the core message and factual content of the original text. The handling of keywords such as "systemic corruption," "oligarchy," and "anti-corruption measures" is appropriate, with standardized and accurate translations of professional terms. However, some statements remain somewhat vague, and it is recommended to further enhance the precision of the terminology to improve the professionalism and authority of the translation.
The translation primarily covers the main points of the original text, including the definition of corruption, historical context, current status, anti-corruption agencies, and public reaction. The overall structure is clear, with distinct layers, and no key information has been overlooked.--A15928872517（留言） 2025年5月11日 (日) 08:22 (UTC)
這篇翻譯整體語言規範，句式結構清晰，用詞較為正式，符合漢語書面表達的基本要求。大多數句子通順自然，沒有明顯的語法錯誤或生硬直譯的現象。
在翻譯準確性方面，文章基本忠實地傳達了原文的核心內容。特別是在信息公開權、知情權、政府透明度等關鍵概念的翻譯上，術語使用較為規範，有效地體現了原文的含義。然而，某些細節表述仍顯不夠清晰，部分術語略顯模糊，可能會影響中文讀者的理解。為提升準確性，建議參考相關法學和政治學文獻，確保專業術語的使用更加精準和一致。
內容方面，翻譯較為全面地涵蓋了原文所涉及的各個要素，包括信息自由的定義、發展歷程、法律框架、國際實踐及現實挑戰等。譯文結構清晰，條理分明，有助於讀者系統地理解這一議題。如果能夠增加一些特定背景的解釋，如不同國家法律制度的差異或典型案例的介紹，將進一步提升譯文的可讀性和文化適應性。
This translation adheres to overall language standards, with clear sentence structure and more formal wording that meets the basic requirements for written expression in Chinese. Most sentences flow naturally with no obvious grammatical errors or forced translations.
In terms of translation accuracy, the article faithfully conveys the core content of the original text. Key concepts such as the right to information, the right to know, and government transparency are translated with proper terminology, effectively reflecting the original meaning. However, some details are not sufficiently clear, and certain terms may appear vague, potentially affecting the understanding of Chinese readers. To improve accuracy, it is recommended to refer to relevant legal and political literature to ensure more precise and consistent use of specialized terms.
Regarding content, the translation comprehensively covers various elements of the original text, including the definition, development, legal framework, international practices, and current challenges of freedom of information. The structure of the translation is clear and well-organized, which helps readers systematically understand the topic. If additional explanations of specific backgrounds, such as differences in legal systems across countries or the introduction of typical cases, could be added, it would further enhance the readability and cultural adaptability of the translation.--A15928872517（留言） 2025年5月11日 (日) 08:23 (UTC)
翻譯整體流暢，句式清晰，表達自然。大部分句子沒有語法錯誤或生硬直譯，但部分長句結構稍顯笨拙，邏輯銜接有待加強。建議進一步優化句式，使文章更簡潔流暢。
翻譯準確傳達了核心內容，尤其在性別平等、女性勞動參與等關鍵概念的翻譯上較為標準。但在某些術語和句子的翻譯上可能存在細微偏差，特別是涉及文化背景時，可能影響讀者的理解。建議對文化特色概念做適當解釋。
該文章較為全面地涵蓋了日本性別不平等的各個方面，結構清晰，內容組織合理。但若能加入更多數據、案例和國際對比，內容的深度和權威性將更強。
The translation is generally fluent, with clear sentence structures and natural expression. Most sentences are free from grammatical errors or awkward literal translations, but some longer sentences are slightly clumsy, and the logical flow could be improved. It is recommended to further optimize sentence structures to make the article more concise and fluid.
The translation accurately conveys the core content, especially in the translation of key concepts such as gender equality and female labor participation, where the terminology is fairly standard. However, there may be slight discrepancies in the translation of certain terms and sentences, particularly when dealing with cultural context, which could affect the reader's understanding. It is suggested to provide appropriate explanations for culturally specific concepts.
The article covers various aspects of gender inequality in Japan fairly comprehensively, with a clear structure and well-organized content. However, adding more data, case studies, and international comparisons would enhance the depth and authority of the content.--A15928872517（留言） 2025年5月11日 (日) 08:25 (UTC)
這篇翻譯在語言質量上，翻譯表達流暢自然，符合中文的語言習慣，句式結構清晰且語法正確。所選詞彙恰到好處，避免了過於生硬的直譯，尤其在體育專業術語的翻譯上，展現了較高的準確性和專業性。然而，某些地方的表達可以更加簡潔，以提升整體的流暢性，避免冗長的句式影響閱讀體驗。
在翻譯準確性方面，能夠清楚地傳達比賽的核心信息，特別是在涉及背景、參賽隊伍及其相關細節時，翻譯做得比較到位。總體來看，翻譯準確性較高，沒有明顯的誤譯。
從內容完整性來看，這篇翻譯很好地涵蓋了原文的主要信息，沒有遺漏重要內容。特別是在賽事背景、參賽隊伍及比賽安排等方面，翻譯都做了詳盡的介紹，確保讀者能夠全面了解賽事的基本情況。
This translation is of good language quality, expressing itself smoothly and naturally, conforming to Chinese language habits, with clear sentence structure and correct grammar. The selected vocabulary is just right, avoiding overly harsh literal translations, particularly demonstrating high accuracy and professionalism in the translation of sports terminology. However, some expressions can be more concise to enhance overall fluency and avoid lengthy sentence structures affecting the reading experience.
In terms of translation accuracy, it clearly conveys the core message of the competition, particularly when it comes to background, participating teams, and related details. Overall, the translation accuracy is high, with no obvious mistranslations.
From a content completeness perspective, this translation effectively covers the main information of the original text without omitting any important details. In particular, the translation provided detailed introductions in terms of the event background, participating teams, and competition schedule, ensuring that readers could gain a comprehensive understanding of the basic situation.--A15928872517（留言） 2025年5月11日 (日) 08:26 (UTC)
該譯文整體表達較為準確，能夠較好地傳達原文的主旨與邏輯。語言通順，句式結構清晰，譯者在處理長句和複雜語法結構時展現出較強的語言組織能力。對原文中一些具有文化或制度背景的術語也進行了恰當的本地化處理，使譯文更符合中文讀者的閱讀習慣。同時，譯者在保持原意的基礎上，對部分表達進行了適度潤色，增強了語言的流暢度與表達力。然而，個別句子在詞語選擇上略顯直譯痕跡，若能進一步注意語言的地道性與表達的自然性，譯文質量將更上一層樓。總體而言，該翻譯體現出紮實的語言功底與較高的翻譯技巧，是一篇較為出色的譯作。The overall expression of this translation is fairly accurate and effectively conveys the main idea and logic of the original text. The language is smooth, the sentence structure is clear, and the translator demonstrates strong linguistic organization skills when handling long sentences and complex grammatical structures. Some terms with cultural or institutional backgrounds in the original text have also been appropriately localized to better align with the reading habits of Chinese readers. At the same time, the translator appropriately refined some of the expressions while maintaining their original meaning, enhancing the language's fluency and expressiveness. However, individual sentences exhibit slight traces of literal translation in their word choices. If we pay more attention to the authenticity of the language and the naturality of the expression, the quality of the translation will improve significantly. Overall, this translation demonstrates a solid foundation in language skills and high translation techniques, making it an outstanding work.--Chensiyu2004（留言） 2025年5月12日 (一) 13:38 (UTC)
基本做到了忠實原文、表達清晰。文章主題較具抽象性，涵蓋法律、政治與公民權利等方面，譯者能夠準確把握核心概念，並用恰當的中文表述，使讀者能夠清楚理解原文的主旨與邏輯結構。在術語處理方面，如「信息透明」、「公眾監督權」等翻譯得當，體現了較好的專業素養。譯文語言自然流暢，大部分句子結構順暢，語義完整。但個別段落略顯直譯，語序不夠地道，影響了部分內容的可讀性，建議今後加強英漢思維轉換的訓練。Basically achieved fidelity to the original text and clear expression. The article's topic is more abstract, covering areas such as law, politics, and civil rights. The translator can accurately grasp the core concepts and express them in appropriate Chinese, enabling readers to clearly understand the main idea and logical structure of the original text. In terms of terminology handling, translations such as "information transparency" and "public oversight rights" are appropriate, reflecting good professional competence. The translation language flows naturally, with most sentences having smooth structures and complete semantics. But some paragraphs are slightly literal translations, lacking proper word order, which affects the readability of certain content. It is recommended to strengthen training in English-Chinese thinking conversion in the future.--Chensiyu2004（留言） 2025年5月12日 (一) 13:41 (UTC)
該譯文整體表現出較強的語言功底與對原文內容的準確理解。然而，也存在個別用詞略顯直譯、表達稍顯生硬的問題，建議在今後的翻譯中進一步注重語言的地道性與漢語表達習慣。若能在自然流暢性上做進一步優化，譯文質量將更為出色。總體來看，該翻譯準確度高、表達清晰，是一篇較為成熟的譯作，值得肯定。This translation demonstrates a strong linguistic foundation and accurate understanding of the original content. However, there are also issues with slightly literal translations of certain words and somewhat stiff expressions. It is recommended that future translations place greater emphasis on the authenticity of language and Chinese expression habits. If further optimized for natural fluency, the translation quality will be even better. Overall, this translation is highly accurate and clearly expressed, making it a fairly mature work worthy of praise.--Chensiyu2004（留言） 2025年5月12日 (一) 13:43 (UTC)
語言自然，準確地傳達了原文關於賽事背景、參賽隊伍、關鍵比賽及球員表現等方面的信息。譯者在處理體育類術語方面展現了較高的專業素養，例如「T20」、「淘汰賽」、「擊球率」等術語翻譯得當，體現出對板球運動的基本了解。文章結構清晰，節奏緊湊，譯文也很好地保留了原文的新聞風格和客觀語氣。在數字、統計和賽事結果等信息翻譯中準確性較高，確保了信息傳遞的嚴謹性。The language is natural, accurately conveying information about the tournament background, participating teams, key matches, and player performance. The translator demonstrated a high level of professionalism in handling sports terminology, such as "T20," "elimination match," and "hit rate," effectively translating terms that reflect a basic understanding of cricket. The article structure is clear, the rhythm is tight, and the translation effectively preserves the original news style and objective tone. Accuracy is high in the translation of digital, statistical, and event results, ensuring the rigor of information transmission.--Chensiyu2004（留言） 2025年5月12日 (一) 13:45 (UTC)